Mr. Bean’s
Crazy Morning
Last week, Mr.Bean
had a Plan. He was going to meet the dentist to check his teeth at 9 am so, he
set the alarm rang at 8 am before he slept. It was 8 am so, the alarm rang but
he didn’t get up. He kept his sleeping until 9.50 am. He could get up after his
head pushed the door and then he did some little exercises. He also shaved
after he did the exercises, but he had a trouble. Suddenly, the shaver machine
that he used to shave his nostril went into it. It was so funny accident but he
could handle it. He looked at the watch. “Oh No”,he said surprisingly. It was
8.50 am and he rembered that he had a promise. And then he took some clothes
and toohpaste then he ran to the car quickly.
Before he went into
the car, he took a brick. Then he drove the car fast to the dentist’s clinic.
On the way, he put the brick on the accelerator to push it and it was a funny
and briliant idea. He remembered that he didn’t dress up yet, so he decided to
dress up in the car. He wore the shirt and the trousers by drove his
car. It was so crazy and dangerous. Because he did two different activities at
the same time, but he could do it extremely well. After that he brushed his
teeth by unusual way. A few minutes later, he arrived there and he parked his car then he
went into the clinic.
- From this story i can learn that the discipline is important to do in every aspect in our live to make our live gonna be better.
In paragraph one, at the last sentence "...and toohpaste then he ran to the car quickly.." I think that is not "toohpaste", but it is "toothpaste" you have missing word "t" in the word "toothpaste. .
BalasHapus"He was going to meet the dentist to check his teeth at 9 am so, he set the alarm rang at 8 am before he slept"
BalasHapusput the "," before coordination conjunction.
thanks for your comments guys. i'll fix it on my next writing...
BalasHapusEhmm... does the shaving machine use to shave the nostril?
BalasHapusI think it use to shave the moustache and beard... :)
thanks for your suggestion mom...
Hapus